Score: 7

"It would be a 10, but..."

submission: 50 Frames Collab 3

date: June 21, 2008

I can't give a 10 to something that has no audio compression. For god's sake this could have easily been 3 megs with no audible change.

Score: 7

"Good effort."

submission: The Balkan War

date: June 8, 2008

A few things to improve -
1. The sniper scene needed a LOT more to warrant the amount of time it got. You should have animated the scope by hand to make it seem more like a scope, things should have been going on while he was scoped in (like an explosion and some fighting and he should have been moving the scope around really fast and getting it just in the right place when an explosion knocks it off) and you needed to actually show the kill (and it should have been quite gruesome - like the sniper has to shoot twice because he hits the guy in the leg the first time). Or at least do something interesting following the bullet.
2. Correct a spelling error - it should be "100,000 LIVES" not 100,000 lifes.
3. Make the music last until the end.
4. Don't have characters talking that you can't hear when you CAN hear explosions, unless you have a really high pitched tone.
5. I want to see a slow motion bullet.
6. Explosions add spice too.

Score: 9

"Very nice!"

submission: The Painting

date: May 26, 2008

The animation could do with some work, but I like your message and use of music. You are good at conveying emotion and meaning. I look forward to working with you on the Asturias Collab. One thing I noticed, which made me think you weren't being sincere:
S mile
E njoy
I nspire
L ive
Reverse the first letters and you realise what those teachings are. :P